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Updated docs/app/1.0/start/index.html with shorter paragraphs #1764

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@ghost ghost commented Sep 28, 2016

@arthurevans suggested edits to this page to streamline it.

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LGTM. Thanks!

@@ -125,7 +120,7 @@ <h2 class="underline">Build Apps</h2>
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<p>Ready to get your hands dirty and revolutionize the modern web? Join Rob Dodson from the Chrome Developer Relations team as he explores the ins and outs of Polymer, a new library that's pushing the boundaries of what's possible in the browser. Learn about the basic building blocks that make up a Polymer application, and see how to compose those elements into buttery smooth mobile experiences. The future of front end development is all here, on the Polycasts playlist!</p>
<p>Join Rob Dodson from the Chrome Developer Relations team for Polycasts, a comprehensive set of videos exploring the ins and outs of Polymer. Start a new Polymer project from scratch, add functionality to your elements with behaviors, or get a crash course on understanding data binding. Create accessible components, and localize them for your target audience.</p>

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Going to suggest we cut the words "with behaviors" because they are going away in 2.0 and that way we can keep the wording the same. Resulting sentence is a little vague, but still OK I think...

@ghost ghost merged commit 0f818e6 into master Oct 3, 2016
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