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Someone who is better with writing should look over the text #2

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robbie-c opened this issue Jan 30, 2017 · 1 comment
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Someone who is better with writing should look over the text #2

robbie-c opened this issue Jan 30, 2017 · 1 comment

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The description should be snappier. Otherwise the tone is quite friendly which I like, but I'd feel happier if someone other than me looked over the text.

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Changed the description in #3

It now says

A better environment for making things

Rather than

Let’s get together to try to make things and/or make things that make things better for everyone! It's a co-operative event taking place over one day where we all get excited about what everyone is building, with a discussion at the beginning and demos at the end.

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