diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 1a5f5d58..726986d6 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -1702,17 +1702,19 @@ Lifecycle of Chartered Groups charter drafts go through a public [=charter refinement=] phase during which the [=charter=] receives [=wide review=] and the [=Chartering Facilitator=] attempts to find [=consensus=] on the charter. + The [=Team=] may send notice to the [=AC=] + when starting development of a new charter prior to the [=charter refinement=] phase.

Initiating Charter Refinement

- [=Charter refinement=] (see below) is initiated - by the [=Team=] sending an [=charter/Advance Review Notice=] + Formal [=charter refinement=] (see below) is initiated + by the [=Team=] sending an [=charter review notice=] to the [=Advisory Committee=], to the public, and, in the case of rechartering, to the affected [=Group=]. - This Advance Review Notice must indicate: + This charter review notice must indicate: * A short summary of the proposal. * The location of the [=charter draft=], which must be public. * How to participate in the discussion of this [=charter draft=] and where to file issues. @@ -1763,7 +1765,7 @@ Charter Refinement that the [=Team=] is failing to address to be processed immediately. - If the discussions have not concluded within the time frame announced in the [=charter/Advance Review Notice=], + If the discussions have not concluded within the time frame announced in the [=charter review notice=], the [=Chartering Facilitator=] must inform the AC (and, in the case of rechartering, the affected [=Group=]) of this delay, of the status of the discussions, and of the revised expected duration of [=Charter Refinement=].