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Co-authored-by: Joshua Shapiro <[email protected]>

docs/setup_instructions/windows_installation_instructions.md

@@ -139,9 +139,9 @@ The downloaded installer will have a name like `RStudio-2022.02.2-win.exe` (the
 Open this file and follow the prompts to install RStudio onto your computer.
 You may need to give permission to modify your system.
 
-##### Update an RStudio setting
+##### Update RStudio line ending setting
 
-Next, we recommend that you update this setting in RStudio to ensure that code we write is compatibility across different machines.
+Next, we recommend that you update the line ending setting in RStudio to ensure that code we write is compatible across different machines, and in particular between the Windows and WSL/Ubuntu system.
 
 In RStudio, go to `Tools > Global Options` .
 Click `Code` on the left-side menu, and select the `Saving` tab.
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ To install Pandoc on the _WSL 2_ side of your machine, enter this command in the
 sudo apt-get install pandoc
 ```
 
-You will then be prompted for your password, and Pandoc will install.
+You may then be prompted for your password, and Pandoc will install.
 
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