Various changes to content text for readability or style (#97)

Co-authored-by: Mathieu Bélanger <[email protected]>
PolyCortex · Nov 22, 2020 · 22c5b05 · 22c5b05
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diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ const CallToActionSection = () => (
           <FloatingCard
             cardClassName="bg-gradient-warning"
             headerText="Record my sleep"
-            bodyText="Use our comprehensive guide to get your own results. It shows a list of the necessary equipment, the EEG montage, the hardware setup, and also gives some tips and tricks!"
+            bodyText="Use our comprehensive guide to get your own results. It shows a list of the necessary equipment, the EEG montage, the hardware setup, and also gives some tips and tricks to get the most accurate results!"
             button={<RecordMyOwnSleepButton className="btn-white mt-4" />}
           />
         </Col>

diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ const MotivationSection = () => (
       <h2 className="mt-3">Why Would I Analyze My Sleep?</h2>
       <p className="lead text-justify">
         Although we spend a major part of our day sleeping, we cannot truly understand what happens during this time, as
-        sleep is inherently an altered state of consciousness. With Polydodo we offer an accessible way to answer the
+        sleep is inherently an altered state of consciousness. With Polydodo we offer a practical and fairly accurate way to answer the
         question "How was my sleep?".
       </p>
       <p className="text-justify">

diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ const TabsSection = () => {
                   <TabPane className="tabs_section__body" tabId={`activeTab${TABS.SECOND}`}>
                     <p className="text-justify">
                       Your data is in your hand. Nothing is sent over the internet. Biosignals are sensitive data and we
-                      take your privacy very seriously. That is why everything is running locally.
+                      take your privacy very seriously. That's why everything runs locally, on your machine.
                     </p>
                   </TabPane>
                   <TabPane className="tabs_section__body" tabId={`activeTab${TABS.THIRD}`}>

diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ const TeamSection = () => (
             <span className="btn-inner--icon mr-1 text-primary">
               <i className="fas fa-globe" />
             </span>
-            <span className="btn-inner--text text-primary">Go To Website</span>
+            <span className="btn-inner--text text-primary">Learn more</span>
           </Button>
         </Col>
       </Row>

diff --git a/web/src/views/performance/index.js b/web/src/views/performance/index.js
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ const Performance = () => {
       />
       <Container className="mt-5 text-justify">
         <p>
-          Ever wonder what is the value of this application? This page aims to illustrate the relative performance of
+          Ever wondered what is the value of this application? This page aims to illustrate the relative performance of
           our sleep scoring compared to clinical hypnogram scoring (which is usually considered the state-of-the-art
           technique).
         </p>