ENDOC-527 note about Hub versions #615
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| # Entando Hub | |||
| ## Overview | |||
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| The Entando Hub enables a team to share components across Entando Applications. It can be installed in Entando 6.3.2 or higher and includes API-level integration with the Entando 7.0 App Builder. | |||
| The enterprise Entando Hub enables teams to share components across the organization and between Entando Applications. It can be installed in Entando 6.3.2 or higher and includes API-level integration with the Entando 7.0 App Builder. | |||
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This sentence looks like it's only describing the enterprise Hub which is the third option below. I think the original sentence was better for a description of the Hub in general. Just my 2 cents.
| * Entando Cloud Hub is the public catalog containing packaged business capabilities and components provided by Entando and its partners throughout the world. | ||
| * An enterprise Entando Hub, developed and curated by Entando clients and partners, can be used to share components within their organization or made available for public use. | ||
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| This tutorial covers the steps for an enterprise Entando Hub: |
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| The enterprise Entando Hub enables teams to share components across the organization and between Entando Applications. It can be installed in Entando 6.3.2 or higher and includes API-level integration with the Entando 7.0 App Builder. | |||
| The Entando Hub enables teams to share components across the organization and between Entando Applications. It can be installed in Entando 6.3.2 or higher and includes API-level integration with the Entando 7.0 App Builder. | |||
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"the organization" is unclarified; which org is this referring to? any org or one in particular? (i.e. "their" org vs "an" org)
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| The Hub is installed using the Local Hub and two Entando Bundles. The first bundle contains the micro frontends and microservices while the second sets up the initial content and pages for the Hub user experience. | |||
| The Hub is installed using the Local Hub and two Entando Bundles. The first bundle contains the micro frontends and microservices while the second sets up the initial content and pages for the Hub user experience. | |||
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experience -> interface; we can provide a consistent, tangible user interface, not user experience, i.e. focus on concrete details under our control
| * The Local Hub, included in the Entando App Builder, displays a collection of components ready for use. These can be used to compose an application or as a starting point to create new components. | ||
| * Entando Cloud Hub is the public catalog containing packaged business capabilities and components provided by Entando and its partners throughout the world. | ||
| * An enterprise Entando Hub, developed and curated by Entando clients and partners, can be used to share components within their organization or made available for public use. | ||
| * The **Local Hub**, included in the Entando App Builder, displays a collection of components ready for use to compose an application or as a starting point to create new implementations. |
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the grammar is a bit off here: collection of components...as a starting point -> collection of components...which comprise (just one example)
"ready for use" struck me as off so i googled -> ready to use. "ready-to-use" also shows up as a modifier, so "...components ready to use for application composition..." or "...ready-to-use components to compose..." (etc.)
"implementations" is a bit vague and imprecise; what you had previously is more accurate, where these components are the starting point to create new components, although i realize we want to avoid that repetition. i actually like what you had before (the 2 sentences, with ready for use -> ready to use) - simple and clear and correct
| * An enterprise Entando Hub, developed and curated by Entando clients and partners, can be used to share components within their organization or made available for public use. | ||
| * The **Local Hub**, included in the Entando App Builder, displays a collection of components ready for use to compose an application or as a starting point to create new implementations. | ||
| * **Entando Cloud Hub** is the public catalog containing packaged business capabilities and components provided by Entando and its partners throughout the world. | ||
| * An **enterprise Entando Hub**, developed and curated by Entando clients and partners, can be used to share components within their organization or made available for public use. |
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"their" doesn't work here; clients and partners aren't part of a single organization -> "their respective organizations"
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