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 								<h2>Erin Conley</h2>
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-							<p>Ph.D. in experimental particle physics
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-							Experience in data analysis and science communication</p>
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-							<h2>A broad skillset</h2>
+							<h2>My education and experience has equipped me with a broad skillset.</h2>
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-								<p>Experience with software development, data analysis in C++ and Python, and establishing repositories with accompanying documentation. As an example, see the <a href="https://github.com/erinecon/forward-fitting">forward-fitting GitHub repository</a>.</p>
+								<p>Experience with software development in C++ and Python, analysis over large data sets, and documentation of the work. For instance, see this <a href="https://github.com/erinecon/forward-fitting">GitHub repository</a> I made as part of a peer-review paper I authored.</p>
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-								<p>Skilled writer with a certification in science communication. Experience in technical writing, editing and peer review, documentation, and writing for general audience.</p>
+								<p>Passionate writer with both amateur expereince and professional training. Knowledge in technical writing, editing, peer review, documentation of research and software, and writing for general audience.</p>
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-								<p>Experience with teaching, mentorship and outreach. Through community volunteering and the physics graduate student organization, I engaged in opportunities to educate children of all ages about various science and math topics. I also undertook an analysis project aimed toward opinions and concerns of academics in high-energy physics and astrophysics.</p>
+								<p> I have participated and organized various outreach efforts (educational or otherwise) by volunteering in my local community, working within the physics graduate student organization, and particpating through other community-led efforts.
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