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Co-authored-by: Blake Covarrubias <[email protected]>

website/content/docs/k8s/deployment-configurations/external-service.mdx

@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ The process to register an external service in Consul on Kubernetes consists of
 1. Define the external service and its health checks in a [`Registration` CRD](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/registration).
 1. Apply the CRD to your Kubernetes cluster. Internally, this action triggers an API call to Consul's [`/catalog/register` endpoint](/consul/api-docs/catalog#register-entity) to register the service.
 1. When using Consul's service mesh, you should also:
-  - Deploy a [terminating gateway](/consul/docs/k8s/connect/terminating-gateways) so that the external service can communicate with downstream services.
-  - Define [service intentions](/consul/docs/connect/intentions) between the external service and services it communicates with.
+  - Deploy a [terminating gateway](/consul/docs/k8s/connect/terminating-gateways) so that downstream services can communicate with the external service.
+  - Define [service intentions](/consul/docs/connect/intentions) for the external service and the downstream services that communicate with it.
 
 ## Guidance
 

website/content/docs/release-notes/consul-k8s/v1_5_x.mdx

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ We are pleased to announce the following Consul updates.
 
 ## Release highlights
 
-- **External Services CRD**: You can now configure and register external services, including their health checks, alongside existing Kubernetes application manifests with the new [`Registration` Custom Resource Definition (CRD)](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/registration). This CRD changes the workflow to register a service running on an external node with the Consul catalog, but external services continue to require a terminating gateway to communicate with downstream services in the service mesh. Refer to [Register external services on Kubernetes overview](/consul/docs/k8s/deployment-configurations/external-service) for more information.
+- **External Services CRD**: You can now configure and register external services, including their health checks, alongside existing Kubernetes application manifests with the new [`Registration` Custom Resource Definition (CRD)](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/registration). This CRD changes the workflow to register a service running on an external node with the Consul catalog. A terminating gateway is still required to enable downstream services in the service mesh to communicate with external services. Refer to [Register external services on Kubernetes overview](/consul/docs/k8s/deployment-configurations/external-service) for more information.
 
 - **File system certificate**: A new [`file-system-certificate` configuration entry](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/file-system-certificate) for Consul API Gateway on VMs supports specifying a filepath to the certificate and private key on the local system. Consul on Kubernetes deployments that use `consul-k8s` Helm chart v1.5.0 or later use file system certificates instead of inline certificates without additional configuration. For information about certificate configuration for Kubernetes environments, refer to [Gateway Resource Configuration](/consul/docs/connect/gateways/api-gateway/configuration/gateway).
 

website/content/docs/release-notes/consul/v1_19_x.mdx

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ We are pleased to announce the following Consul updates.
 
 ## Release highlights
 
-- **External Services CRD**: You can now configure and register external services, including their health checks, alongside existing Kubernetes application manifests with the new [`Registration` Custom Resource Definition (CRD)](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/registration). This CRD changes the workflow to register a service running on an external node with the Consul catalog, but external services continue to require a terminating gateway to communicate with downstream services in the service mesh. Refer to [Register external services on Kubernetes overview](/consul/docs/k8s/deployment-configurations/external-service) for more information.
+- **External Services CRD**: You can now configure and register external services, including their health checks, alongside existing Kubernetes application manifests with the new [`Registration` Custom Resource Definition (CRD)](/consul/docs/connect/config-entries/registration). This CRD changes the workflow to register a service running on an external node with the Consul catalog. A terminating gateway is still required to enable downstream services in the service mesh to communicate with external services. Refer to [Register external services on Kubernetes overview](/consul/docs/k8s/deployment-configurations/external-service) for more information.
 
 - **Transparent Proxy on Nomad**: Consul’s CNI plugin enables the use of transparent proxy for seamlessly redirecting traffic through the Envoy proxy without requiring application changes, or elevated network privileges for the workload. As a result, you can onboard applications without additional configuration between a service and its upstreams.