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fix(l10n): Clarify recovery key hint explanation for l10n #15444

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  • Previous sentence included two "it"s that could confuse localizers.
  • We want to ensure that messages are clear for localizers.

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  • Update string and add comment

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Closes: #FXA-7724

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* Previous sentence included two "it"s that could confuse localizers.
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* Update string and add comment

Closes #FXA-7724
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r+ assuming Vesta or Copywright/Design has looked at this and like "it" as well :pun-husky: since there's a couple different ways to phrase this while only referring to "it" once.

@@ -6,7 +6,8 @@
# "key" here refers to the "account recovery key"
flow-recovery-key-hint-header-v2 = Add a hint to help find your key
# This message explains why saving a storage hint can be helpful. The account recovery key could be "stored" in a physical (e.g., printed) or virtual location (e.g., in a device folder or in the cloud).
flow-recovery-key-hint-message-v2 = This hint should help you remember where you stored your account recovery key. We’ll show it to you when you use it to recover your data.
# "it" here refers to the storage hint, NOT the "account recovery key"
flow-recovery-key-hint-message-v3 = This hint should help you remember where you stored your account recovery key. We can show it to you during the password reset to recover your data.
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Was this new copy approved by Vesta / Design? Not sure if she would prefer "We'll show it" (or "we will") instead of "We can show it".

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Or "We can show this hint to you during…" and avoid using "it" completely.

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Reverting to this string with "it" was suggested by Bryan, and reviewed and approved by Melissa (CX). Less repetitive than having "this hint" in two successive sentences.

@vpomerleau vpomerleau merged commit ef0b2de into main Jun 14, 2023
@vpomerleau vpomerleau deleted the FXA-7724 branch June 14, 2023 18:09
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