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The first sentence is about how we cannot imagine life without internet.. this is NOT why AT3 exist, it's because censorship. The next paragraph phrases this in it's first line. Perhaps make that the first of the introduction.
You can add Iran with ISIS to be very recent. They find stuff on you? You are executed instantly.
Is tribler a platform?
"The decentralized nature of the anontunnels makes it a superior alternative to Tor for anonymous file sharing." Really? Why ? How ? What does it do better ? What does it do what Tor does not?
Bachelor End Project group -> Bachelor thesis group.
"In section 2.2, we will discuss a library that allows to run Python code on an Android device: Python for Android. One of the contributers to Python for Android is The Global Square. We will explain what The Global Square exactly is and what their goals are in section 2.6." The first sentence should be deleted, Refactor the second and third.
"Since the Tor-tunnel functionality is written in Python" -> anontunnels are already introduced, so name them anontunnels.
"and a library called Python for Android already exists, it is an even more natural choice to develop it for Android." -> just python for android, it was introduced earlier.
"The Parallel and Distributed Systems group at Delft University of Technology has implemented a Tor-like protocol in the Python programming language. This protocol is currently used in a beta 6 version of Tribler. In contrast to Tor, it does not use centralized components and is therefor a very scalable and secure way of communicating anonymously." This was already mentioned twice earlier.
"In this section an overview of Tribler and its components is presented. We describe the new beta version that uses anonymous tunnels in depth." anontunnels, not anonymous tunnels.
"Tribler is a fully decentralized peer-to-peer le sharing platform developed by the Parallel and Distributed Systems group at Delft University of Technology." again that platform, is Tribler a platform?
That quote is wrong! No quotation marks, no source! It is literally copy pasted.
"The system is designed in such a way that it is capable of running in a network environment." We should add challenged back again or find a synonym... this is a bad sentence now, with its follow up