phrasing improvement

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <[email protected]>

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@@ -1746,8 +1746,8 @@ Charter Refinement</h3>
 	* All issues filed against the [=charter draft=] must be [=formally addressed=],
 		and their resolutions tracked in a disposition of comments.
 	* [=Wide review=] of the [=charter draft=] is initiated and completed.
-	* Decisions are made as  [=group decisions=] of all individuals participating in this process.
-		(However note that only W3C [=Members=] and the [=Team=] can particpate in a formal [[#Votes|vote]].)
+	* Decisions are made as [=group decisions=], where the group is made up of all individuals participating in this process,
+		(though only W3C [=Members=] and the [=Team=] can participate in any formal [[#Votes|vote]]).
 
 	The [=charter refinement=] phase concludes when there is either:
 	* A [=group decision=] to initiate [=AC Review=] of the [=charter draft=].